Re: [PATCH] Documentation: English fixes in kgdb/kdb article

[Nir Lichtman <nir@lichtman.org>]

On Fri, Oct 18, 2024 at 06:27:01PM +0100, Matthew Wilcox wrote:
> On Fri, Oct 18, 2024 at 04:31:36PM +0000, Nir Lichtman wrote:
> > -Next you should choose one of more I/O drivers to interconnect debugging
> > +Next you should choose one of the I/O drivers to interconnect the debugging
> 
> Wrong fix ;-)  "one or more".

Will fix in v2 :)

> 
> > @@ -201,7 +201,7 @@ Using loadable module or built-in
> >  Configure kgdboc at runtime with sysfs
> >  ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
> >  
> > -At run time you can enable or disable kgdboc by echoing a parameters
> > +At run time you can enable or disable kgdboc by echoing the parameters
> >  into the sysfs. Here are two examples:
> 
> Maybe "by writing parameters into sysfs"?

Yah, sounds better will fix as well in v2.

> 
> > @@ -631,8 +631,6 @@ automatically changes into kgdb mode.
> >  
> >  	kgdb
> >  
> > -   Now disconnect your terminal program and connect gdb in its place
> > -
> 
> Is there a reason you deleted this?  It seems important.
> 

Yes, this sentence is duplicated twice (with slightly different wording), here and a line below.