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From: "Paul Eggleton" <bluelightning@bluelightning.org>
To: "Robert P. J. Day" <rpjday@crashcourse.ca>
Cc: docs@lists.yoctoproject.org
Subject: Re: [docs] [PATCH 09/13] ref-manual: add FIT_KERNEL_COMP_ALG*
Date: Thu, 15 Apr 2021 22:07:36 +1200	[thread overview]
Message-ID: <6250809.G0QQBjFxQf@linc> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <799bb8cf-ca33-325f-b717-f68db0b7a1ed@crashcourse.ca>

Hi Robert

On Wednesday, 14 April 2021 20:35:19 NZST Robert P. J. Day wrote:
> On Wed, 14 Apr 2021, Quentin Schulz wrote:
> > On Tue, Apr 13, 2021 at 05:19:50PM -0700, Paul Eggleton wrote:
> > > --- a/documentation/ref-manual/variables.rst
> > > +++ b/documentation/ref-manual/variables.rst
> > > @@ -2580,6 +2580,17 @@ system and gives an overview of their function
> > > and contents.> > 
> > >     :term:`FIT_HASH_ALG`
> > >     :
> > >        Specifies the hash algorithm used in creating the FIT Image. For
> > >        e.g. sha256.> > 
> > > +   :term:`FIT_KERNEL_COMP_ALG`
> > > +      Compression algorithm to use for the kernel image inside the
> > > fitImage. +      At present, the only supported values are "gzip"
> > > (default) or "none", +      which allows disabling of compression if it
> > > would otherwise be enabled.> 
> > I'm not a native speaker and I'm struggling to understand that last line,
> > would it be possible for you to rephrase please?
> 
>   i would just drop the second half of that second sentence -- the
> first part says all that needs to be said:
> 
>   Compression algorithm to use for the kernel image inside the
>   fitImage; at present, the only supported values are "gzip" (default)
>   or "none".

Sounds reasonable, I've done exactly this. I also adjusted the text to remove 
mention of setting  FIT_KERNEL_COMP_ALG_EXTENSION if FIT_KERNEL_COMP_ALG is 
set to "none" (upon closer inspection that isn't necessary based on how the 
code behaves).

> i would pick nits with the varieties of the phrase "fitImage";
> regardless of how it's used as a variable, i believe the proper
> reference is "FIT image", which is how it should appear in the above,
> methinks.

Yep I fixed this as well. We're not consistent with this in the existing text, 
I haven't fixed that so we probably should in future.

Thanks,
Paul



  parent reply	other threads:[~2021-04-15 10:07 UTC|newest]

Thread overview: 40+ messages / expand[flat|nested]  mbox.gz  Atom feed  top
2021-04-14  0:19 [PATCH 00/13] Documentation updates for 3.3 Paul Eggleton
2021-04-14  0:19 ` [PATCH 01/13] ref-manual: add METADATA_REVISION and METADATA_BRANCH Paul Eggleton
2021-04-14  7:59   ` [docs] " Quentin Schulz
2021-04-14  0:19 ` [PATCH 02/13] Use variables for minimum host versions and bump Python to 3.6 Paul Eggleton
2021-04-14  0:19 ` [PATCH 03/13] ref-manual: update/fix text for SDK_VERSION Paul Eggleton
2021-04-14  0:19 ` [PATCH 04/13] overview-manual: fix git command line Paul Eggleton
2021-04-14  0:19 ` [PATCH 05/13] ref-manual: and SDK_CUSTOM_TEMPLATECONF to glossary Paul Eggleton
2021-04-14  8:03   ` [docs] " Quentin Schulz
2021-04-14  0:19 ` [PATCH 06/13] ref-manual: add REQUIRED_VERSION and adjust PREFERRED_VERSION entry Paul Eggleton
2021-04-14  8:10   ` [docs] " Quentin Schulz
2021-04-14  8:17     ` Nicolas Dechesne
2021-04-14  0:19 ` [PATCH 07/13] ref-manual: add python3targetconfig class and remove python 2 references Paul Eggleton
2021-04-14  0:19 ` [PATCH 08/13] ref-manual: add passwd-expire to EXTRA_USERS_PARAMS Paul Eggleton
2021-04-14  8:13   ` [docs] " Quentin Schulz
2021-04-14  8:19     ` Nicolas Dechesne
2021-04-14  8:36       ` Robert P. J. Day
2021-04-15 14:18         ` Michael Opdenacker
2021-04-14  0:19 ` [PATCH 09/13] ref-manual: add FIT_KERNEL_COMP_ALG* Paul Eggleton
2021-04-14  8:16   ` [docs] " Quentin Schulz
2021-04-14  8:35     ` Robert P. J. Day
2021-04-14  8:41       ` Quentin Schulz
2021-04-14  8:43         ` Robert P. J. Day
2021-04-15 10:07       ` Paul Eggleton [this message]
2021-04-14  0:19 ` [PATCH 10/13] ref-manual: fix reference to build-essential Paul Eggleton
2021-04-14  8:17   ` [docs] " Quentin Schulz
2021-04-14  8:21     ` Nicolas Dechesne
2021-04-14  0:19 ` [PATCH 11/13] ref-manual: tweak buildtools section Paul Eggleton
2021-04-14  0:19 ` [PATCH 12/13] ref-manual: add migration section for 3.3 release Paul Eggleton
2021-04-14  8:26   ` [docs] " Quentin Schulz
2021-04-15  9:52     ` Paul Eggleton
2021-04-15  9:59       ` Quentin Schulz
2021-04-15 10:25         ` Nicolas Dechesne
2021-04-15 14:07           ` Quentin Schulz
2021-04-15 17:32             ` Nicolas Dechesne
2021-04-15 14:14           ` Michael Opdenacker
2021-04-14  0:19 ` [PATCH 13/13] ref-manual: migration guide: add release codenames Paul Eggleton
2021-04-14  8:28   ` [docs] " Quentin Schulz
2021-04-15 13:54 ` [docs] [PATCH 00/13] Documentation updates for 3.3 Michael Opdenacker
2021-04-15 14:00   ` Quentin Schulz
2021-04-15 14:05     ` Michael Opdenacker

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