From: Cornelia Huck <cohuck@redhat.com>
To: "Michael S. Tsirkin" <mst@redhat.com>, Parav Pandit <parav@nvidia.com>
Cc: virtio-dev@lists.oasis-open.org,
virtio-comment@lists.oasis-open.org, shahafs@nvidia.com
Subject: [virtio-dev] Re: [PATCH v3] virtio-net: Improve introductory description
Date: Thu, 09 Feb 2023 13:29:57 +0100 [thread overview]
Message-ID: <877cwr6myi.fsf@redhat.com> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <20230209071430-mutt-send-email-mst@kernel.org>
On Thu, Feb 09 2023, "Michael S. Tsirkin" <mst@redhat.com> wrote:
> On Thu, Feb 09, 2023 at 03:41:08AM +0200, Parav Pandit wrote:
>> @@ -389,8 +392,8 @@ \subsection{Device Operation}\label{sec:Device Types / Network Device / Device O
>> };
>> \end{lstlisting}
>>
>> -The controlq is used to control device features such as
>> -filtering.
>> +The controlq is used to control many device features described further in
>
> many seems subjective.
>
> s/many/some of the/ ?
s/many/various/ instead? That section should cover all of the device
features controled via the control vq.
>
>> +section \ref{sec:Device Types / Network Device / Device Operation / Control Virtqueue}.
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next prev parent reply other threads:[~2023-02-09 12:29 UTC|newest]
Thread overview: 11+ messages / expand[flat|nested] mbox.gz Atom feed top
2023-02-09 1:41 [PATCH v3] virtio-net: Improve introductory description Parav Pandit
2023-02-09 11:38 ` [virtio-comment] " Cornelia Huck
2023-02-09 12:38 ` Parav Pandit
2023-02-09 12:02 ` [virtio-comment] " David Edmondson
2023-02-09 12:45 ` Parav Pandit
2023-02-09 12:48 ` Michael S. Tsirkin
2023-02-09 13:16 ` David Edmondson
2023-02-09 12:18 ` Michael S. Tsirkin
2023-02-09 12:29 ` Cornelia Huck [this message]
2023-02-09 12:31 ` Michael S. Tsirkin
2023-02-09 12:47 ` Parav Pandit
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