From: Guenter Roeck <linux@roeck-us.net>
To: Abhinav Saxena <xandfury@gmail.com>
Cc: linux-kernel-mentees@lists.linuxfoundation.org,
linux-hwmon@vger.kernel.org, linux-doc@vger.kernel.org,
linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org, Jean Delvare <jdelvare@suse.com>,
Jonathan Corbet <corbet@lwn.net>
Subject: Re: [PATCH] hwmon: Documentation: Fix grammar in fan speed trip points explanation
Date: Thu, 7 Nov 2024 16:52:14 -0800 [thread overview]
Message-ID: <07b90400-7f6b-478d-80af-c7e71ac205de@roeck-us.net> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <20241107013849.47833-1-xandfury@gmail.com>
On Wed, Nov 06, 2024 at 06:38:49PM -0700, Abhinav Saxena wrote:
> Fix several grammatical issues in the fan speed trip points documentation:
> - Replace awkward "which % the fan should run at at" construction with
> clearer "that specify the percentage at which"
> - Fix incorrect "is chip depended" to "are chip dependent" for correct
> verb agreement and adjective form
> - Improve readability by reorganizing first sentence and separating the
> complex explanation into simpler parts
> - Add hyphen before "see" to improve readability
> - Remove redundant "at" in temperature description
>
> No functional changes, documentation only.
>
> Signed-off-by: Abhinav Saxena <xandfury@gmail.com>
Applied, after fixing the subject (which needs to include the affected
driver).
Thanks,
Guenter
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2024-11-07 1:38 [PATCH] hwmon: Documentation: Fix grammar in fan speed trip points explanation Abhinav Saxena
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