Re: [PATCH 2/4] docs: Improve grammar, formatting in Video4Linux

[Bagas Sanjaya <bagasdotme@gmail.com>]

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On Sun, May 18, 2025 at 02:08:04AM -0600, Jonathan Corbet wrote:
> >      description of the correct character encoding for Programme Service
> >      name strings. Also from RDS specification, PS is usually a single
> >      eight character text. However, it is also possible to find receivers
> > -    which can scroll strings sized as 8 x N characters. So, this control
> > +    which can scroll strings sized as 8 x N characters. Therefore this control
> 
> This kind of change just seems like churn that isn't really improving
> the content?

I prefer the original as both so and therefore have the same meaning.

> >  ``V4L2_CID_RDS_TX_ALT_FREQS (__u32 array)``
> >      The alternate frequencies in kHz units. The RDS standard allows for
> > -    up to 25 frequencies to be defined. Drivers may support fewer
> > -    frequencies so check the array size.
> > +    up to 25 frequencies to be defined. Because drivers may support fewer
> > +    frequencies, check the array size.
> 
> Here too, I'm not sure I see the value in this kind of change.

Again I'm agree.

Thanks.

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