Re: [PATCH 3/4] docs: Improve grammar in Userspace API/fwctl

[Bagas Sanjaya <bagasdotme@gmail.com>]

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On Sat, May 17, 2025 at 04:27:10PM +0300, Hanne-Lotta Mäenpää wrote:
> Fix typos and improve grammar in the documentation for
> fwctl subsystem.
> 
> Use the word user space consistently, instead of having
> two variants (user space vs. userspace).
> 
> Change wording of denied behaviour to be disallowed
> behaviour when describing the interface.
> 
> Signed-off-by: Hanne-Lotta Mäenpää <hannelotta@gmail.com>
> ---
>  Documentation/userspace-api/fwctl/fwctl.rst | 30 ++++++++++-----------
>  1 file changed, 15 insertions(+), 15 deletions(-)
> 
> diff --git a/Documentation/userspace-api/fwctl/fwctl.rst b/Documentation/userspace-api/fwctl/fwctl.rst
> index fdcfe418a83f..a74eab8d14c6 100644
> --- a/Documentation/userspace-api/fwctl/fwctl.rst
> +++ b/Documentation/userspace-api/fwctl/fwctl.rst
> @@ -54,7 +54,7 @@ operated by the block layer but also comes with a set of RPCs to administer the
>  construction of drives within the HW RAID.
>  
>  In the past when devices were more single function, individual subsystems would

Do you mean that devices used to be singleton in its functionality? Or having
multiple functions?

> -grow different approaches to solving some of these common problems. For instance
> +grow different approaches to solving some of these common problems. For instance,
>  monitoring device health, manipulating its FLASH, debugging the FW,
>  provisioning, all have various unique interfaces across the kernel.
>  
> <snipped>...
>   3. Write access to function & child debug information strictly compatible with
>      the principles of kernel lockdown and kernel integrity protection. Triggers
> -    a kernel Taint.
> +    a kernel taint.

Improving grammar includes s/Taint/taint/?

Confused...

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