Re: [PATCH] memorder: Fix conjunction use

["Paul E. McKenney" <paulmck@linux.vnet.ibm.com>]

On Thu, Aug 31, 2017 at 12:12:46AM +0900, Akira Yokosawa wrote:
> >From 453e325a5fbfc1de64cb51d200fe744bbb79016f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
> From: Akira Yokosawa <akiyks@gmail.com>
> Date: Wed, 30 Aug 2017 23:55:37 +0900
> Subject: [PATCH] memorder: Fix conjunction use
> 
> Fixes: 06ca30969d19 ("memorder: Acquire operations are not cumulative")
> Signed-off-by: Akira Yokosawa <akiyks@gmail.com>
> ---
> Paul,
> 
> This "unless" doesn't make sense as the following clause is
> "there are at most two threads involved". There should be
> other word choices. It's up to you which one to use.

Good catch, applied, thank you!

							Thanx, Paul

>     Thanks, Akira
> --
>  memorder/memorder.tex | 2 +-
>  1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)
> 
> diff --git a/memorder/memorder.tex b/memorder/memorder.tex
> index 3b4763e..78f2cc4 100644
> --- a/memorder/memorder.tex
> +++ b/memorder/memorder.tex
> @@ -518,7 +518,7 @@ failure.
>  Column ``C'' indicates cumulativity and propagation, as explained in
>  Sections~\ref{sec:memorder:Cumulativity}
>  and~\ref{sec:memorder:Propagation}.
> -In the meantime, this column can always be ignored unless there
> +In the meantime, this column can always be ignored when there
>  are at most two threads involved.
> 
>  \QuickQuiz{}
> -- 
> 2.7.4
> 

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