* [PATCH] vgaarbiter: documentation grammar correction
@ 2025-02-04 14:08 Pranav Tyagi
0 siblings, 0 replies; 8+ messages in thread
From: Pranav Tyagi @ 2025-02-04 14:08 UTC (permalink / raw)
To: linux-doc; +Cc: linux-kernel-mentees, skhan, Pranav Tyagi
Corrects the following grammatical issues in the VGA Arbiter documentation:
- Fixes subject-verb agreement by changing "co-exists" to "co-exist"
- Corrects pluralization by changing "server" to "servers"
- Improves sentence structure for clarity
Signed-off-by: Pranav Tyagi <pranav.tyagi03@gmail.com>
---
Documentation/gpu/vgaarbiter.rst | 6 +++---
1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)
diff --git a/Documentation/gpu/vgaarbiter.rst b/Documentation/gpu/vgaarbiter.rst
index bde3c0afb059..d1e953712cc2 100644
--- a/Documentation/gpu/vgaarbiter.rst
+++ b/Documentation/gpu/vgaarbiter.rst
@@ -11,9 +11,9 @@ Section 7, Legacy Devices.
The Resource Access Control (RAC) module inside the X server [0] existed for
the legacy VGA arbitration task (besides other bus management tasks) when more
-than one legacy device co-exists on the same machine. But the problem happens
+than one legacy device co-exist on the same machine. But the problem happens
when these devices are trying to be accessed by different userspace clients
-(e.g. two server in parallel). Their address assignments conflict. Moreover,
+(e.g. two servers in parallel). Their address assignments conflict. Moreover,
ideally, being a userspace application, it is not the role of the X server to
control bus resources. Therefore an arbitration scheme outside of the X server
is needed to control the sharing of these resources. This document introduces
@@ -106,7 +106,7 @@ In-kernel interface
libpciaccess
------------
-To use the vga arbiter char device it was implemented an API inside the
+To use the vga arbiter char device, an API was implemented inside the
libpciaccess library. One field was added to struct pci_device (each device
on the system)::
--
2.47.1
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* [PATCH] vgaarbiter: documentation grammar correction
@ 2025-02-07 16:53 Pranav Tyagi
2025-02-08 3:06 ` Bagas Sanjaya
0 siblings, 1 reply; 8+ messages in thread
From: Pranav Tyagi @ 2025-02-07 16:53 UTC (permalink / raw)
To: linux-doc; +Cc: linux-kernel-mentees, skhan, Pranav Tyagi
Corrects the following grammatical issues in the VGA Arbiter documentation:
- Fixes subject-verb agreement by changing "co-exists" to "co-exist"
- Corrects pluralization by changing "server" to "servers"
- Improves sentence structure for clarity
Signed-off-by: Pranav Tyagi <pranav.tyagi03@gmail.com>
---
Documentation/gpu/vgaarbiter.rst | 6 +++---
1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)
diff --git a/Documentation/gpu/vgaarbiter.rst b/Documentation/gpu/vgaarbiter.rst
index bde3c0afb059..d1e953712cc2 100644
--- a/Documentation/gpu/vgaarbiter.rst
+++ b/Documentation/gpu/vgaarbiter.rst
@@ -11,9 +11,9 @@ Section 7, Legacy Devices.
The Resource Access Control (RAC) module inside the X server [0] existed for
the legacy VGA arbitration task (besides other bus management tasks) when more
-than one legacy device co-exists on the same machine. But the problem happens
+than one legacy device co-exist on the same machine. But the problem happens
when these devices are trying to be accessed by different userspace clients
-(e.g. two server in parallel). Their address assignments conflict. Moreover,
+(e.g. two servers in parallel). Their address assignments conflict. Moreover,
ideally, being a userspace application, it is not the role of the X server to
control bus resources. Therefore an arbitration scheme outside of the X server
is needed to control the sharing of these resources. This document introduces
@@ -106,7 +106,7 @@ In-kernel interface
libpciaccess
------------
-To use the vga arbiter char device it was implemented an API inside the
+To use the vga arbiter char device, an API was implemented inside the
libpciaccess library. One field was added to struct pci_device (each device
on the system)::
--
2.47.1
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* Re: [PATCH] vgaarbiter: documentation grammar correction
2025-02-07 16:53 Pranav Tyagi
@ 2025-02-08 3:06 ` Bagas Sanjaya
[not found] ` <CAH4c4jKe7Q-E1LhA0KxOxEjK-gn=JY7e=2GN13X=yutaO8k3Pw@mail.gmail.com>
0 siblings, 1 reply; 8+ messages in thread
From: Bagas Sanjaya @ 2025-02-08 3:06 UTC (permalink / raw)
To: Pranav Tyagi, Linux Documentation, Linux DRI Development,
Linux Kernel Mailing List
Cc: linux-kernel-mentees, skhan, David Airlie, Simona Vetter,
Maarten Lankhorst, Maxime Ripard, Thomas Zimmermann,
Jonathan Corbet
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On Fri, Feb 07, 2025 at 10:23:25PM +0530, Pranav Tyagi wrote:
> Corrects the following grammatical issues in the VGA Arbiter documentation:
> - Fixes subject-verb agreement by changing "co-exists" to "co-exist"
> - Corrects pluralization by changing "server" to "servers"
> - Improves sentence structure for clarity
>
+Cc: DRM folks.
> Signed-off-by: Pranav Tyagi <pranav.tyagi03@gmail.com>
> ---
> Documentation/gpu/vgaarbiter.rst | 6 +++---
> 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)
>
> diff --git a/Documentation/gpu/vgaarbiter.rst b/Documentation/gpu/vgaarbiter.rst
> index bde3c0afb059..d1e953712cc2 100644
> --- a/Documentation/gpu/vgaarbiter.rst
> +++ b/Documentation/gpu/vgaarbiter.rst
> @@ -11,9 +11,9 @@ Section 7, Legacy Devices.
>
> The Resource Access Control (RAC) module inside the X server [0] existed for
> the legacy VGA arbitration task (besides other bus management tasks) when more
> -than one legacy device co-exists on the same machine. But the problem happens
> +than one legacy device co-exist on the same machine. But the problem happens
> when these devices are trying to be accessed by different userspace clients
> -(e.g. two server in parallel). Their address assignments conflict. Moreover,
> +(e.g. two servers in parallel). Their address assignments conflict. Moreover,
> ideally, being a userspace application, it is not the role of the X server to
> control bus resources. Therefore an arbitration scheme outside of the X server
> is needed to control the sharing of these resources. This document introduces
> @@ -106,7 +106,7 @@ In-kernel interface
> libpciaccess
> ------------
>
> -To use the vga arbiter char device it was implemented an API inside the
> +To use the vga arbiter char device, an API was implemented inside the
> libpciaccess library. One field was added to struct pci_device (each device
> on the system)::
>
The diff looks OK.
Reviewed-by: Bagas Sanjaya <bagasdotme@gmail.com>
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* [PATCH] vgaarbiter: documentation grammar correction
@ 2025-02-20 16:49 Pranav Tyagi
0 siblings, 0 replies; 8+ messages in thread
From: Pranav Tyagi @ 2025-02-20 16:49 UTC (permalink / raw)
To: maarten.lankhorst, mripard, tzimmermann, airlied, simona, corbet
Cc: dri-devel, linux-doc, linux-kernel-mentees, bagasdotme, skhan,
Pranav Tyagi
Corrects the following grammatical issues in the VGA Arbiter documentation:
- Fixes subject-verb agreement by changing "co-exists" to "co-exist"
- Corrects pluralization by changing "server" to "servers"
- Improves sentence structure for clarity
Signed-off-by: Pranav Tyagi <pranav.tyagi03@gmail.com>
Reviewed-by: Bagas Sanjaya <bagasdotme@gmail.com>
---
Documentation/gpu/vgaarbiter.rst | 6 +++---
1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)
diff --git a/Documentation/gpu/vgaarbiter.rst b/Documentation/gpu/vgaarbiter.rst
index bde3c0afb059..d1e953712cc2 100644
--- a/Documentation/gpu/vgaarbiter.rst
+++ b/Documentation/gpu/vgaarbiter.rst
@@ -11,9 +11,9 @@ Section 7, Legacy Devices.
The Resource Access Control (RAC) module inside the X server [0] existed for
the legacy VGA arbitration task (besides other bus management tasks) when more
-than one legacy device co-exists on the same machine. But the problem happens
+than one legacy device co-exist on the same machine. But the problem happens
when these devices are trying to be accessed by different userspace clients
-(e.g. two server in parallel). Their address assignments conflict. Moreover,
+(e.g. two servers in parallel). Their address assignments conflict. Moreover,
ideally, being a userspace application, it is not the role of the X server to
control bus resources. Therefore an arbitration scheme outside of the X server
is needed to control the sharing of these resources. This document introduces
@@ -106,7 +106,7 @@ In-kernel interface
libpciaccess
------------
-To use the vga arbiter char device it was implemented an API inside the
+To use the vga arbiter char device, an API was implemented inside the
libpciaccess library. One field was added to struct pci_device (each device
on the system)::
--
2.47.1
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